First Fruits of my Picto-Journal

I’m experimenting with a new writing exercise: a journal in which I’ve pasted a picture on every page. When I sit down to write, I use the picture as my prompt. I ran out of glue before I could get very far, but my plan is not to ever “look ahead,” so that I can’t plan what to say to certain prompts in advance. In a way, playing with these pictures is my own special way of doing the Story-a-Day May challenge, I think. What story does this particular picture tell?

Last night’s picture was one I’d cut out of a newspaper ad for summer sales. It showed an adolescent girl lying in the grass, staring up at the sky. She wore blue cut-off jeans and a pink shirt. Her hair was brown. This is what I wrote:

She sees her life unfold like a story
or a dream she doesn’t know she’s dreaming
etched in the clouds above—
fat babies who can make her feel like a child again—
because she doesn’t feel like one now.

When did summer become bittersweet?
It will be years before she knows that word
but she knows the feeling now.
Something about the smell of wet grass
and the bright blue sky and
fat cherub baby, pirate ship clouds
fill her with an aching sadness.

She thinks that somewhere, somehow, this has to do with love.

But she wears cut-off jeans,
and the light hair on her legs
is long and soft, for the last time.
Come September, a disdainful glance
from a long-haired girl will send her
rummaging through Mom’s sock drawer
for a razor. 

One summer past, she could lie down
flat in this field, but her body
will lay flat
never again.
She closes her eyes,
dreams of babies, pirates, and angels
Something about love,
a twitching between her thighs.
Above,
the clouds go by.
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3 Responses to First Fruits of my Picto-Journal

  1. Jenna says:

    I hope you get some new glue soon! I like the picto-journal idea!

    • I got some new glue today, so I’m ready to roll. 😀 And it’s a good thing, because I don’t like the Story-a-Day prompt today and will be reverting back to the journal, I think.

  2. […] read a lot of poetry, so I’ll be doing that this month, too. I intend to rely heavily on my Picto-Journal for inspiration (I’ll be adding some new pics to it tonight). I also plan to use the daily […]

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